alrite we hav had some feedback on our film from the class. wooo. here wot they think.
Positives: Good choice of music. Good underwater shot. Good acting (well dun lads). realy interesting and unusual shots. Fast paced editing. good continuity.
Things to work on: shakey zoom, no gun shot or blood wen andy gets shot. lighting? (not sure wot they mean). No establishing shot (personally dont think we need 1). Narrative structure (i thought it was spot on again). wen az dies, music too quiet. Music peaked to soon.
We shud get sum mre feedback wen the other class watches it.
L8rs
John
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