Arite every1. John ere. Got some more feedback for our film here our the results again.
Positives: Nice puddle reflection, slow motion papers. Mise en scene - location + costume. Nice dramatic music. innotive camerawork (if i do say so myself) lol. jacket on the stairs? variety of angles + framing. brilliant plot. Good cross cuts. jumping over fence shot is good.
Things ot work on: (here we go) Confusing narrative? (how) bad continuity. dialogue at start was unclear. gun shot plz? that was it. they were all repeated tho.
rite i will put the appendix numbers up ere soon. speak 2 u all l8r.
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Good work posting some of your feedback John. This will really help your group when writing section 4 of the Production Log. Have you burned copies to show friends and family?
ITS A POND, NOT A PUDDLE!!!
do you think you can get sum quotes for da feedback? nething will do. cheers
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